This is for Asmita. Thanks for cheering me up.?

kashmir



Sweet smell of incense,

Like a breath of fresh air.

Without any pretense,

She whispered without care.



Asmita her name, beauty defined,

She spoke and I listened, completely resigned.

She spoke of the beauty I would not see,

An Indian girl of barely fifteen.



She could not understand why I'm so sad,

With all that I have I surely should be glad.

I listened to her even though I couldn't hear,

The only thing I thought of, the beauty of Kashmir.



Her innocence brought a tear to my eye,

Yes it is true, I a grown man started to cry.

She told me to look at the sun and the hills

The beauty all around me, sweet daffodils.



Thank you Asmita, for making me see,

All of the things I truly can be.

Your words gave me hope and the desire,

Deep down inside, there still burns a fire.





Thank you Asmita for your kindness. I will always remember you.

This is for Asmita. Thanks for cheering me up.?
I am speechless. That was beautiful!!!!!!!! I am deeply touched by ur words! I THANKYOU from the bottom of my heart. You made me feel special. Thats the sweetest thing someone has done for me. Thank you very very much!
Reply:These are beautiful sentiments from the "heart". There is no limit in what you can put to words. :)
Reply:Asmita will love it, nice job, my poet.



Marilyn (your angel)
Reply:Creative and very beautiful! A most wonderful way of thanking someone! It was a delight to read! Thank you for sharing! = )
Reply:Wow....there are no words. Beauty doesn't even come close to the feelings in those words.
Reply:Wow thats so deep and Beautiful I love it its also charming....
Reply:thats beautiful...
Reply:Like a puss emanating from a deep sore

It shot out from me,

urging a emotions to surge out from me

and that ever so sore





is there a ray of hope??

yeah, I see it but he didn't

He wasn't even sure he could cope

Cos he dwelt on the dark side of existence.... or u didn't??



u that i find hard to leave,

are u tired of weeping???

ur chest up and down it heaved

and maybe u should be down and sleeping





U have found the ray of light

lurking and smurking like a suckling

An image? a mental sight

Is to find a healing truth from the mouth of a suckling





Life is strange

like a married but yet to be engaged!!!





Yeah its a sonnet!!!

But I was hoping u like it. It just kind of conveys my feelings and my warmest wishes to you. HOLD TIGHTLY TO THOSE INNOCENT KIDS!!! INNOCENCE IS PRECIOUS!!