What do you think of my poem what I wrote?

I wandered lonely as a cloud

That floats on high o'er vales and hills

When all at once I saw a crowd

A host of golden daffodils.



So far so good but I can't think of any more. Any suggestions?

What do you think of my poem what I wrote?
Sorry everyone else took you seriously. I thought it was funny "what I wrote"!

Don't worry he's been out of copyright for many, many years.
Reply:Sorry Lilly but your poem is what is called plagiarism. A piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work.

Your 1st, 3rd and 4th lines are taken from Wordsworth's poem "Daffodils".



This is not legal and can warrant the copyright act coming into play here. DELET THIS POEM NOW.



Robert
Reply:I don't like those old fashioned poetic licence words like o'er

Crowd doesn't really rhyme with cloud. Proud does. Try that.

I saw a proud lot of yellow daffs. It's so important to choose the right image in poetry. All depends on the word's worth.
Reply:I picked the lot and sold them on

I'm filthy rich, I made a ton

Tomorrow I'll being orchid picking

Then my nose and bogey flicking

Finally I'll be picking balls

For yes the national lottery calls

And when I'm on my yatch at sea

I'll bless dear William's poetry
Reply:You're a plagarizing moron. You didn't write that poem, Wordsworth did. Delete it now or I will report you



3..2...1!



Too late! You've been reported
Reply:well it`s original,,,,,:)
Reply:Bears a striking resemblance to Wordsworth.
Reply:i reckon wordsworth wont mind you copying him cos e aint feeling none to chatty.
Reply:for legal reasons, lets just hope your a decendant of wordsworth
Reply:Are you a moron?
Reply:have you tried singing ?