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for you...



sometimes when dark clouds reign

and light is dimmed

when the rains fall without relent

and thinking is blurred

we will recall moments -

moments when reality changed

moments when larger selves emerged

moments when our beings knew love -

tenderness with a different face

cementing shared visions

as the waters cleanse the muddied earth.



-the sun





for you...



sometimes when the wind blows by

and daffodils go out of shape

tender thoughts of you flutter by

as i lie lazily under the shade

i will ponder moments -

moments we savour

moments we treasure

moments of endeavor -

hidden from the world's gaze

clandestine beings behind rays

celebrating the gift of knowing

solemnizing the art of loving.



-the moon

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Very nice. I like the bended up daffodils best. I also really liked "savor, treasure, endeavor"



Very good.



A star for you.



TD
Reply:I really enjoyed reading that. Your wording was excellent. Very good descriptive phrasing makes it a great reading experience. Well done, and a star from me.
Reply:thunderous sadness seeping

intellect dimmed

when the pain enters without release

learning is blurred

creating new moments

where synchronicity lived within a sphere

spheres where earth is not completely 'round

time for boredom to come to a halt

boredom unchanging in your eternal ununiqueness

stakes with different faces

roads and sidewalks of ended visions

as uranus cleans the tarnished earth
Reply:wow, it's definitely perfect! I will give you a star for that amazing poem!
Reply:Wow, very powerful and deeply romantic in nature as well. You grabbed my soul with your mournful prose. I wish I could write as well as you, or even TD Euwaite. You both have real talent. I appreciate reading your efforts.



Now if only a woman would write to me with her heart, like the way you wrote, that would be heaven sent love, a kiss from above.
Reply:It's very good!



Thinking is blurred (I mean mine)



but I enjoyed it. I always liked symmetry. It is reassuring!
Reply:One simple word:



CAPITALIZATION.





No offense, but that's stupid. Why wouldn't you capitalize your poem? It's completely grammatically incorrect.







ugh, whatever. It still comes off as immature writing.