If you could read this it would make my day!?

okay, I wrote a poem and want to know if its completely sucky

On this pretty, sunny day,

I row my canoe over the sun’s reflection,

And I relax on a daffodil-dotted hill,

Thinking about my past, present, and future.



On this gorgeous, windy day,

I wish to be a giant fluff in the sky,

And I pretend to fly friskily along beside,

Thinking about my past, present, and future.



On this wonderful, rainy day,

I wander through heavens tears,

And I wonder where it comes from,

Thinking about my past, present, and future.



On this beautiful, snowy day,

I watch the flakes fall from my window,

And I follow each one trying to catch it,

Thinking about my past, present, and future.



rate it 0-10

0 being no good start again

10 being publish it



thanks it would really mean alot to me if you voted or rated



(if you do rate it TRUELY with your heart i'll give you 10 points)

If you could read this it would make my day!?
Ill give it a 10 and a star i can feel the thought you put into it .Keep up the good work and spread the love.
Reply:4 seasons in one day. has it ever happened.

seriously i like.

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