Daffodil smiles
On the children in the park
Needing their mothers
Lazy, hazy moon
Smiles on the propane grills
In a timid way
Frustrated drivers,
Eating, honking horns in vain
Things that humans need
What do you think of these haikus?
I really like the second one, but they are all good.
Haiku's can be the Everyman's poem, or they can be fantastic. Your's are really good.
Reply:simple form and words
make clear the cloudiest mind
poetry for all
Keep it up!
Reply:i like 1 and 2, but 3 was ok. in the end they are ALL better than any one i could done (lol).
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