Sunday, January 22, 2012

What do you think, alliterative success, or just litter?

Delicate dew drips down--

Daffodil drinks

Diamonds dot dales

Dust dampens, demanding docility:

Delicious day.

What do you think, alliterative success, or just litter?
No, Alobar - back to the drawing board or should I say...



Definitely deleterious, demanding dynamited destruction.

Dew doesn't drip

Diamonds don't dot dales

Dust doesn't dampen
Reply:This is interesting

A poem with words that are strictly ds

This is not litter.

but I never seen a poem like this till now.
Reply:Delightful. Full circle too. Demanding docility....a nice effect painted with that.
Reply:Duodenally deleterious.
Reply:Drat! Didn't dream descending diamond drops dot dates.
Reply:dexterously delivered.
Reply:This is not one of your best poems, but you do have the alliteration solid.

Tori
Reply:(Dragnet theme.) Da, de, da...da.

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